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 Post subject: Giselle's Stuff
 Post Posted: Thu Sep 21, 2006 8:28 pm 
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Yes, I write Poems and Lyrics .. I will use this thread to share my stuff with you
Comments are welcome :P I know my English sucks .. but please I keep on trying

bloody tears from a girl that's not me

If you would realy know me
then I won't say it hurts
you would see
you would care

I can't tell you waht I feel
You have to find out yourself
This isn't realy
this isn't me

Sometimes my life seems a lie
not my life, but a girl I don't want to know
Tears from my eyes
Tears of my blood


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I´d really know you Giselle

Nice first poem anyhow :D

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very good Giselle.Well done :)


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that's a very nice poem


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I like it :D Please post more.

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its nice :)

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thx all, here some older poems, didn't had the time and the inspiration for new ones

Days of Sunrise

When will the sun rise again
and shine up on my face
Untill that moment I will wait
in my metal cage
When the days of light begin
I will watch them come
the sun wil shine on my skin
burning me like hell

The sun can't warm my hear again
it's hard and cold as ice
from days and years I'll wait
when the sun won't rise
When the days of light vanish
for the first time I enjoy
A will always live in banish
in a cage I can't destroy


Tell me

Tell me that you love me
or else trow me away
Tell me that you hate me
but don't beg me to stay

Chorus:
I lied to you and everyone
when I said, I don't scratsh it al away
I don't cut it al away
Only the feeling of pain
makes me don't go away

Aks me how I'm doing
even when I don't speak
Aks how I'm feeling
not only when I'm weak

Chorus:
I lied to you and everyone
when I said, I don't scratsh it al away
I don't cut it al away
Only the feeling of pain
makes me don't go away

Tell me that you leave me
that you trow me away
Tell me that you hate me
'caus I want to go away

Yes, I want to go away
Not only scratch it al away
I will cut it al away
and then .. fade away, away, away

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they are really beautiful Judith.nice work

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You don't need an Opheliac

I would change the world
Just to make me believe that you love me
I would change the world
Only for an other change for you and me

Don't wanne be alone
Without you it feels so cold
Don't know what to say
You are my words today
And my sould tomorrow
Just make me believe

I would change the world
Just to make me believe that you love me
I would change the world
Only for an other change for you and me

I wanne be with you
Just talking make me feel alright
Don't know what to do
All I live for is you
I feel Opheliac
Just make me Believe
(this Time)

I would change the world
Just to make me believe that you love me
I would change the world
Only for an other change for you and me
For I Feel Opheliac
Soon I'm not with you, your not with me
Then I am Opheliac



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Nice poem, again

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Keep up the good work Giselle - Your work is appreciated on here :nod:


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Giselle wrote:
You don't need an Opheliac

I would change the world
Just to make me believe that you love me
I would change the world
Only for an other change for you and me

Don't wanne be alone
Without you it feels so cold
Don't know what to say
You are my words today
And my sould tomorrow
Just make me believe

I would change the world
Just to make me believe that you love me
I would change the world
Only for an other change for you and me

I wanne be with you
Just talking make me feel alright
Don't know what to do
All I live for is you
I feel Opheliac
Just make me Believe
(this Time)

I would change the world
Just to make me believe that you love me
I would change the world
Only for an other change for you and me
For I Feel Opheliac
Soon I'm not with you, your not with me
Then I am Opheliac



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And I want to be better .. so feel free!!

very nice indeed :D ...the only thing i have to say about it is "an other" its one word "another" :)

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I love 'You don't need an Opheliac'! Very cool :D Please post more!

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They're all really good. Post more.

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Here another one :oops:

Escape

Will you ever understand me
would think like I do?
Could you ever feel the same
I'm lost without you

Breath life in me again
I'll never hurt you
Can you live without me?
You never feel like I do

I would change my life
live on in a dream
I want to escape
Becaus my life can't be real

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