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Great work, love it.... :D

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Nothing new for a couple months :think:


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I am not dead yet .. unfortunately.



I have not really been able to write for a while and I guess I will just have to post some older poems I never posted here because I feel not so committed to this community anymore.

The Rain



A gathering of clouds
in the once bright sky

The rain is coning closer
the thunder is not yet there



The soft rumble stirs the air
as the wind blows through the willows

A lonesome bird sings
a song, once a duet

The trees are touching
and the first drops fall down

On the face of the earth
they shatter into little pieces


Break the ground
wash away all that is good

The thunder makes a silent bang
as it destroys everything





BANG…



I threw in some form to add something I learned in class to my poetry.






Out off...

Out of my body, out of my mind!
Out of my veins and out of sight!
With all the love there is no cure,
even hate cannot, I'm sure.
It itches skin and breaks the bones,
it turns a golden heart to stone.
Needles draining blood out of me,
without my blood I will be free.

Out of my data, out of my genes!
Out of my system, out of scenes!
My heart shrunk and left alone,
in a place where blood has flown.
A nightmare turned into reality,
redifyning the rules of gravity.
burried deep, six feet under ground,
still, silence, no a single sound.

((Out of my body, out of my mind!
Out of my data, out of my genes!
Out of my veins and out of sight!
Out of my system, out of scenes!

Out of my body, out of my mind!
Out of my veins and out of sight!

Out of my data, out of my genes!
Out of my system, out of scenes!

Out of my body, out of my mind!
Out of my veins and out of sight!))






I absolutely hate the ending now and I think I will just delete it whenever I am able to post in somewhere official except for my blog. Where you can find updates about my life.

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Judith,

Thanks for posting some poems. I like The Rain. but it is a sad poem.

On a side note. Did you get the e-mail I sent you... maybe 4 to 6 weeks ago?


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Yes I did, but I guess I just failed to reply. I sometimes just fail at things. My poems are sad most of the time and I don't fucking care. I am about to post an exception but this I had to do for college so I thought lets do something different. I am not too happy about it though, it could be so much better for so many reasons but I didn't put my heart in it. This poem is just something I wrote and has no feelings whatsoever, makes it less personal but boring and not good to me.


Loves makes blind

There once was a girl, name Lucy Lu
She never knew what she had to do
when a boy asked her out

She would smile and shake her head
Hoping they would all drop dead
before they thought of her

One day an unusual boy came along
He would not see what he did wrong
when he asked her to dance

Lucy Lu smiled and walked away
while her dress behind her swayed
breaking his precious heart

By a moonlit balcony she sat at night
when bloody paws gave her a fright
and gracefully she fainted

She woke up lying in the boy’s hairy arms
She fell hard and fast for his boyish charms
she went out with a werewolf

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Pleez find and kill me
As I need wings to fly
Someone I used to Luv
Has gone to the other side

As these tears dissolve me
To leave me cold outside
I wonder if u'll ever care
That u left me far behind


Giselle -I'm on the 2nd floor
So I'm not poetic-but u inspired me!!Keep writing and do not abandon us


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don't fucking highjack my thread. That is just rude and impolite!

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ur reaction 2 approval of & inspiration puzzles me-sorry 2 offend u-lader !


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The Living Long Deceased

White noise from the radio
Grey noise in my head
clouding up the errors
pouring down on me
Rain from my headphones
filling up the holes
dripping into my heartbeat
overflows my soul
Recovering lost data
from forgotten memories
heartaches, soulaches, shot wounds,
the hand that smothered me.
Everlasting white noise
right from the machine
stronger than a sleeping drug
killing all but me
The numbers that we are
forgotten after our turn
not a patient, just an income
to feed your material lust
I anger and the sadness
the truth that is a lie
the living and the killing
but no one ever dies
Drugs on sale for nothing
no therapy we need
the shot wounds never healing
the fed is who we feed
A castle build of paper
protecting the heart inside
transparent and fragile
is what we hide behind
The eyes that cast their empathy
have forgotten after they blink
the ship that has been broken down
no one watches it sink
When we hit rock bottom
there is nothing that will reach
our hands hold out in agony
the living long deceased.

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Excellent-still luv ya!


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I am just going to be brutally honest with you, I don't like your msn way of typing. It's such a neglect of correct spelling.

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Giselle wrote:
I am just going to be brutally honest with you, I don't like your msn way of typing. It's such a neglect of correct spelling.


Want a hugsie?

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Nah thanks, I think Craner might need one now.




Here to stay

If I could only run away
Take my life and clear my way
Let rivers of tears run down
Turns fake smiles into frowns
Pack a bag and leave this place forever
All alone, I don’t long to be together
Cold nights after colder days
Even my heart is in decay
Broken wishes trail along
While I sing another sad song
Another year passed me by
Well the tears dry up and I can’t cry
365 days of struggle lay ahead
I know find myself back in bed
Wishing my life would be at end
Hoping words would simply mend
Deep within I know dead is no road to go
What else, I don’t know
A million wishes upon trillion stars
Have never taken me far
Spend my day killing time
Hurting their hearts, shattering mine.
I want this night to ever last
To be the future, to be the past.
When I sleep, it will pass away
but all I’ve learned is that I’m here to stay

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Very good again- I love this one most of all, as it's a reflection of deep feelings some of us truly have-thanks Giselle!


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No Flow, No Rhyme, no nothing, just rambling in poetry form

Porcelain Doll

Your white skin so perfect
When the light touches
Your eyes gazing at the distance
Your lips closed, silent
You never spoke a word

Your little dress lace trimmed
bloomers cotton rimmed
Your shoes tipping on the floor
When I hold you tight
to dance with you more

All my memories lie with you
your eternal smile
No one could ever be so true
I thought I had it all
my pretty, porcelain doll

Your face is cracked from fallen down
your smile, your eyes
turned into a saddening frown
because it’s easy to break
a fragile, porcelain heart

A sharp, white skin so cold
Your hair, fake hay gold
Your eyes, just paint, that all
you never spoke, a word
my broken, porcelain doll

I threw you away, you were of no use
after all the words, all the abuse
I could not look innocence in the eye
My childhood was over
your life has passed by

Now I am here all by myself
without you on the shelf
You always looked out over me
high above all
and for all to see

Your white skin so perfect
When the light touches
Your eyes gazing at the distance
I know you knew it all
my shattered, lifeless porcelain doll

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