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 Post subject: I Will Never Forget U
 Post Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:53 pm 
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This Poem was kind of really hard to write down.. As I read it again to make sure it sounds ok it made me cry.. As you all know what my grandmother is going through right now.. So I did a poem for her, what I have to say or what is on my mind.. This is for her.. But she is still living as of today.. It was hard but I mangage to handle it my self.. Life is life I have to live with.. So below is my Poem and I hope everyone could leave comments about this plz and thank you it will help if you do so..

I Will Never Forget U


You took care of me, when I was born.
You always buy stuff for me when I need it.
You always make me laugh.
You always make me mad.
But most of that I will never forget U


I will never forget your laugh.
I will never forget your touch.
I will never forget your voice.
I will never forget your face.
I will always love you always and forever.
I wish I could take back or go back in time and fix it, but I can't.

God is calling, but it is not your time yet.
When that time is right, I will be there to cry.
I will not go crazy or break down, because you are in a better place.
I will never forget u ever.

By Alisha Aka Lacunacoilfan24

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 Post Posted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 12:59 pm 
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How can anyone say it's good or bad?These are words straight from your heart!

Thanx for sharing it with us!


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That's a very sweet poem.

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I really like the poem.. You did a really great job on it.. :D

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thank you all for commenting on this.. I worked really hard to write it but I had somethings on my mind so that is why I wrote it.. Yes it is for my grandma but she is alive as of now but I did it for her.. :D

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That's very touching. A very nice poem. I lost my grandmother to cancer in 91 and I remember crying when she died. I hope you are staying strong through these tough times.


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That is a very personal poem, Alisha!

As Panos already has wrote: Thanx for sharing it with us!


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hippert wrote:
That is a very personal poem, Alisha!

As Panos already has wrote: Thanx for sharing it with us!



Thank you.. It is kind of personal.. But I had to post it on here so you all can read it and know what I am going through.. But I am in the processing of writing more.. i want to keep up the good work that I do with my poems.. Again thank you all for commenting it means alot to me.. :D

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Hey sissy I like your poem.. You did a really good job on it.. Keep up the good work that you do.. :D

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Thank you.. Glad you all like it.. I will post more poems on here later ok.. :D

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Good job on a sensitive subject.

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Good job on a sensitive subject.


hank you glad you like it.. :D

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