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 Post subject: Two new songs I wrote
 Post Posted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 1:55 am 
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Over the Fog

My mind is tourmented with these thoughts
I just want to end it all
This is the Hell my loneliness have brought
Tonight, I shall fall

All I can hear is deathlike silence
I see my body hanging in the trees
I can not feel my own self violence
My body will sway in the breeze

My spirit screams
My heart cries
My body hangs
I now die

The rope hangs in the moonlight
My body hangs over the fog
I never put up a fight
I just ran into the night

There is a deathlike silence
My body is hanging in the trees
There is no more self violence
My body now sways in the breeze

The Wind Whispers

Blackness of the forest is all I can see
As I run between the trees
The breath of the unknown is on my neck
I now can see my own death

The sky is black with a full moon
This is the night of my wretched doom
The moutain is my shelter
My place to hide then die

I feel with suffering
Fear is building up
My mind is dying
As is my black soul

The moutain is high above the forest
Tree tops is all I can see
I can't stand this misanthropy I feel
Blood now drips from my Neck

The forest is blacker than it ever was
The moon is hidden behind a cloud
The wind whispers of my death

Both Black Metal songs that me and my friend recorded rough demos for.


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Not bad. I like that it kinda has a feeling of mysticism. I wanna hear more.


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Thanks! That feeling was what I trying to go for. I have a bunch more, and I'll post 'em later.


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