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 Post Posted: Sat Mar 14, 2009 2:45 am 
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Well, I'm just gonna make a topic and post all of my stuff in here as I find it/type it up. I have no web sites for my bands, but there will be soon Any ways, heres a new song.

WARNING: Violent and bloody lyrics. May not want to read if the thought of blood bothers you.

Out of the Earth

The face of death is in front of me
I can't see
I can't breathe
The bullet now catches my skull
And my body takes the fall
Many thoughts run through my mind
I feel body now die
As they lower me in the ground (I cry out)
When I come back, you will be found
What you did to me got to me
Killing me
Is haunting me
You laugh in happiness
You will feel my deadliness
I shall begin the fun
There is no place for you to run
I push my fist through the coffin
Tonight... I live

I now feel the earth aganst my decaying flesh
Worms I now see
Now I know
I'm fully alive
Now you will die

RISE!

Out of the earth
Straight from Hell
I will take your breath
Like you took mine

You see a dead man walking
And stop talking
Chill runs down your spine
Your under my control
Now your mine

Run to your house
I'll break through the door
I seek nothing but
BLOOD!

I enter your home
Grab you by the throat
And drag you in the basement

What I want to see
In front of me
Blood pouring
You will die!

I lock the door
Your screams fall on deaf ears
Your cries make me smile

Choking on blood
Slit throat starts the flood

Cave in your skull
Brain now falls

Taking your heart
Ripping appart

Removing your flesh
Burning the rest

This song is for my new band Deathcore band Walkup Boogiedown. Our lyrics range from violernt storys like this to just plain and simply stupid (I.E. "Blood & Ponnys", "Girl... You give Me All the Wrong Winks", "Rock Bottom Is A Collage Education") But, this is one of our first songs.


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I love bloody songs...*____*
you found a fan :D

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Sounds so much like cradle of flith but its pretty good!... :)

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Thanks! Here's our Myspace! Add us and check out our video!

http://www.myspace.com/walkupboogiedownband


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I added you... :D

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Thanks! Very cool band you have! :D

Demo in progress! KEEP AN EYE ON OUR PAGE FOR IT!


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metalhead13 wrote:
Thanks! Very cool band you have! :D

same for yours :D

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New song. It's untitled, but it's written for the most beautiful girl in the world.

Your inside of me (2x)

When I dream, I dream of you
When I cry, I cry for you
If I could, I'd die for you

My mouth can not speak
What my heart cries
My body becomes weak
Any anger dies

Your smile makes my world bright
My heart gets filled with delight

When I hear 'I love you' said
I sit back and think
And wish I could say that to you

As I write this
tears roll down my cheek
YOUR MY REASON FOR BEING


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uh,that's so poetic and romantic... :D
my compliments!!!
I'm never gonna stop telling you I love your lyrics!

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Thanks alot! :D


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that's pretty fucking \m/

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Thanks dude!


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I'm currently working on these, but these provide a rough "structure".

You make me just want to die!

I can't take it
You make it
So I want to
Die!

All damn day
I think about
You telling me
Your true feelings

I hate mind games
Your such a liar! (5x)

My heart fades to black (7x)

I see you when I sleep
I feel you in my heart
It burns and pains
My body feels like its in flames

The thought of you makes me sick
Put a fuckin bullet in my skull
Make it quick
End it all


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uh this is so strong...
hope you're better now...

(well,I avoid to say I love it :wink: )

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Thanks. Another new one.

Thine Hands Shake

I stare in the mirrior
I think about you
I can feel all the fear
I know what I will do

You made me feel high
My heart pounded when you walked by
I prayed for my dream true
I cared more than you knew

You make me feel low
My blood runs cold

My hand shakes with a gun held to my head
Once I pull the trigger I'm dead
What a relief it will be

No pain
No heartache
No sorrow
No love
No hate
No me
No you


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