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 Post Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2009 5:56 pm 
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I havent given this one a name yet its not really that great but tell me what you guys actually think of it anyway...

I Prey on the sky once when the dawn rise's
Cast on thy sun as i bleed eternally
The Pain shall subside but not this time
As i dissapear beyond the misguided twilight

Kill me
Kill me

Should i forever die

Kill me
Kill me

The smell of blood it tastes goood

Kill me
Kill me

Burrrrnnnnnnn!
Burrnnnnnnnn!
Burrnnnnnnn!
Burrnnnnnnn!
Burrnnnnn!
Burrnnnn!

Whispers: Hear thy evil name of the goddness tezla shall you arise from your sleep hear the souls of the dead

Kill me
Kill me

Arise! Arise!

KILL!

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 Post Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:28 am 
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I don't get the feeling u have actually experienced pain/loss/darkness or u r very young & have only had a brush w/actual "darkness" but u nonetheless r heading poetically in the "right" direction (: reminds me of Flowing Tears lyrics-


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