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 Post Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:37 pm 
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The shadows wake, and stir within the darkness,
A lonely soul, who fear and sorrow brings,
The silence screams, and nothing finds contentment
Amongst the fickle, temporary things.

A cry for all that visits in the darkness,
No comfort now for those whose light has died.
Find peace in that which can't remain in light times,
For darkness is what hell, to earth replied.

Sensations that the loneliness is looming,
Fly swiftly when the sun resumes her glow,
And, though we see what can't be seen in darkness,
The light brings with her things which help to know.

Imagination walks alone, unhindered,
When, but a single light, by us is snuffed,
The shadows cannot touch us; we remember?
Remembrance cannot save our minds from trust.

Can one small beam of light restore our trust?
Can simple things like hope renew our sin?
Can shadows tear away our walls, protecting
Us from the world of light which shines within?

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I really enjoyed reading this, good job! :thumbsup:

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You did a really good job on it.. very good :thumbsup:

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You really think so? It's my first real poem, the only one I've been kind of proud of. I wasn't sure how it'd be received. I'm REALLY glad you liked it :) maybe I'll write some more :) :) :)

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You really think so? It's my first real poem, the only one I've been kind of proud of. I wasn't sure how it'd be received. I'm REALLY glad you liked it :) maybe I'll write some more :) :) :)


you do what you can to write poems ok.. I am like that too I have one on here somewhere on this fourm.. If you make more let me know i will read and give you my feedback ok.. :D

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Aww thanks :) I sure will. I'll have a look for yours now...

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