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 Post Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 3:49 am 
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Hmm...I don't write terribly often (wish I could...), but I do kinda like the bits I have come up with....though I get a bit unsure about sharing it at times....but what the hell.....here goes one of 'em....


Debris


Lost within this world
Wandered aimlessly
Wondering where this path
Was ever going to lead

Spending weeks within
Discovering myself
Learning how to heal
The scars that held me down

I am no more
Than so much debris
And this is what
You have done to me

The lies of what I was
The truth of what I am
All came crashing down
You’ve changed every bit of me

Tell me that I can’t
Have what seems so right
That it could never be
Within reality

Turned everything around
Stood life upon its head
I never asked for this
But now I can’t forget

I am no more
Than so much debris
And this is what
You have done to me

The lies of what I was
The truth of what I am
All came crashing down
You’ve changed every bit of me

Everything for me
Changed within a flash
Now no obstacle
Will ever hold me back

I will not give up hope
Always maintain the dream
For we can never know
What the future may bring

I am no more
Than so much debris
And this is what
You have done to me

The lies of what I was
The truth of what I am
All came crashing down
You’ve changed every bit of me

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good one :)

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very nice :D

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::grin:: this is one of my favs Nick....

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Thanks all! Kinda thought you might like that one, Bri! :wink:

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heh, wonder why

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That's amazing, I really like it.

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