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 Post Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2005 11:51 pm 
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AHH!
i cant stand this torture!
standing so close to you
your hands on my waist
feeling your body against mine.
This isnt right
This isnt fair
feeling you near me
the touch of your lips on my neck
AHH!
this is torture!
knowing im not supposed to be here
but i am
you draw me closer each time
wanting more
needing more
with each touch im falling.

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 Post Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2005 12:42 am 
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good structure, although the word choice is lacking. But I can relate, even if it is in a slightly different way.

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