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Cool! That's pretty amazing! hehehe I only have a few english poems. Now I realize thata Rik likes friendship lol hehehe. Good poetry man! keep on! 8)

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Now I realize thata Rik likes friendship lol hehehe.


Yup! I do indeed! There are a few people who have screwed me over on that part but still... (I'm talking real life here, not the internet don't worry! ;)) I have had some differences with people on-line, but all has turned out well! :)

In real life that has been different... there are a few people who did not deserve to be called friend!

But I do care for friendships indeed! :)

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Good poetry man! keep on! 8)


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:clap: Well Done Rik and muzz_jax!

I like 8) :)

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:clap: Well Done Rik and muzz_jax!

I like 8) :)


Thank you! :D

I have to get some stuff on paper again... it's been awile and there are some thought in my head that want to get out... :think:

Yup I think I'm gonna have to write something soon...

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One way?

Could you tell me what happened?
Could you please tell me what the hell went wrong?
We used to get along so well.
Not a problem in the world,
what went wrong?

You used to be such a close friend,
we used to talk about everything.
You used to come by and we could talk for hours.
Around you I seemed to forget everything that was troubling me...

But all of a sudden that all changed.
You started backing out on appointments we made.
I was always there for you, always willing to free up some time...
What the hell was that good for?

You missed out on a lot of dates we planned...
And never got back to me on making up for them.
And to my surprise now you don’t get back to me at all!

I was always the one to start the conversations.
Well I’m getting sick and tired of this... no more!!!!!

I give up!
If you don’t value our friendship why should I?

I really felt I meant something to you.
Guess I was wrong...

I’m sorry it has to be this way, but you have made your point quite clear.

I would like to remind you friend, friendship is not a one way street!!!!!

Rik! :cry:

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Well I have been a bit busy lately, so I have not been able to do all I wanted to do... :doh:
I have a few PM's I still need to answer and well I haven't put anything on paper in quite awile... :(

But I thought, I'll give it a try again! :) Thats why I am dusting off this thread of mine!

It's not a masterpiece, but it's not awfull either! :)

Untitled.

I may not have always liked this life I am living...
I have been moaning and bitching but nothing seemed to change.

Every day the same routine,
everyday just like the next.
Nothing to look forward to,
nothing to make it all worth while...

I have thought about quitting...
leaving all that shit behind!
But I wasn’t even strong enough to do that and well now I am glad about that.

After that I became totally numb.
I could not enjoy my life, but just went on and on...

Just living this plain old life without screwing it up too much...
Living as long as it was permitted and just see when the ship would run ashore and it would all be over!

Then out of the blue, came you!
I just fell so much in love and forgot all about everything...

You are everything I dreamed off...
My reason to get up in the morning,
and the reason I go to bed happy! 

You really made me realise just how great life can be...
And now I want to live a long and wonderful life... with you!!


I am not religious, never have and never will be...
But now I do believe in paradise...

... not as a place you live, but as a way you feel...


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Oh rik, you should stop writing such depressive poems...











j/k - :thumbsup: It's pretty easy to see in that poem what state of mind you're in - Good stuff! :)

It's great how we want to express things when we're happy as well as when we're sad. That's why I have to lay off the ol' goth metal pretty regularly :P

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I like that Rik. It's good to see that you are feeling brighter and more positive about life and living :)

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But now I do believe in paradise...

... not as a place you live, but as a way you feel...


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Those two lines are wonderful and nicely placed. A great way to end your poem :)

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I like that Rik. It's good to see that you are feeling brighter and more positive about life and living :)


Thank you! :) I am glad about that aswell! :) I have not been th most positive person around, that is for sure... It is nice that I finally seem to enjoy my live a little more! :) (appart from the last 3 and a half/4 weeks, but that was because I was pretty sick! :( I'll sent you a PM and explain that properly! ;))

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But now I do believe in paradise...

... not as a place you live, but as a way you feel...


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Those two lines are wonderful and nicely placed. A great way to end your poem :)


:) I do not know where those came from all of a sudden, but I like them aswell! :) I finished the poem and all of a sudden those two lines popped into my head, they really did a good job finishing this poem! :)

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I like that Rik. It's good to see that you are feeling brighter and more positive about life and living :)


Thank you! :) I am glad about that aswell! :) I have not been th most positive person around, that is for sure... It is nice that I finally seem to enjoy my live a little more! :) (appart from the last 3 and a half/4 weeks, but that was because I was pretty sick! :( I'll sent you a PM and explain that properly! ;))


Hey Rik! Good to see you back :D but sorry to hear that you've been poorly :( Hope you are feeling better now :)

As for positivity, well we all have our 'down' times, that's life, but at least if they are few and far between and don't swallow us up then that's got to be good enough I guess. Just make sure that we enjoy the rest of the time :)

Jeez, I have a hundred poems in my head, but will the buggers come out? Nope! :? Glad yours do.

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But now I do believe in paradise...

... not as a place you live, but as a way you feel...


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Those two lines are wonderful and nicely placed. A great way to end your poem :)


:) I do not know where those came from all of a sudden, but I like them aswell! :) I finished the poem and all of a sudden those two lines popped into my head, they really did a good job finishing this poem! :)


Yes, they really did :)

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It's clear to see the idea behind them has improved as you have done more, the most recent one is quite good, maybe a little simplistic, there doesnt seem to be any complexity about it, but thats just my taste perhaps... secondly check grammar and spelling, there are a few errors... for one example it is of, not off.


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It's been awile since I used this old thread...
But I haven't been able to put words down on paper properly for awile! :?

I finally managed to put some stuff on paper again though! :)
These "poems" might appear a bit odd, atleast I think there a little odd!
But I was quite pleased that I got some things on paper again and although there a bit odd, I still like them! :)
Hope I am not the only one who likes them... But please do let me know! Rather you like them or not, I am curious! ;)

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Headache?

Thoughts are running through my head…
Simple thoughts, difficult thoughts.
Sane thoughts, thoughts no one should ever think.

None of them really make sense to me...
I feel like my head is no longer mine.
It feels like someone has gone of with my thoughts and idea’s.

Whoever borrowed my head has returned it broken...
Thank you very much for this terrible headache...

... this was the last time I lend you anything!!

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Hello person!

You were the first person I ever really trusted...
My thoughts, my secrets you knew.
Information misused...
Trust wrongfully put in you!

I am not ice cold. Forgave you all of this.
Tried to make you understand what went wrong, give you a second chance.
Behind my back you went...
An attempt at revenge?

You can’t stand the thought of me being happy and getting on with my life.
Sadly you don’t know this feeling, with you not everything is going fine...
Still you should try to live your own live.
Not simply copy mine...

You think we are much alike...
I used to think that to.
We were both misguided...
But the one clinging to false hope now is you!!

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If not for you…

If not for you I would have given up long ago…
Not thinking you will ever find happiness will do this to you.
Thankfully I held on...
And I found out that sometimes happiness takes two!!

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(the last one, the short one! :P I have written for my girlfriend! :oops: Lets hope she likes it! :))

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Untitled.

Finally some peace and quite…
Finally my head seems to be slowing down.
The last few days have been a nightmare.
Thinking the world might come to an end.

Still uncertain what will happen...
Quite unsure what the next day brings.
Life in all it’s uncertainty,
Ceased to be funny long ago.

There was me thinking I could be happy...
Why do things never work out the way you want?
I know nothings certain but this is just crazy!
Why can’t we just be happy?

I sometimes think it wasn’t meant to be...
Every time we seem to be doing fine something else happens to run it all into the ground.
I sometimes wonder if it’s worth it all.
If we shouldn’t just give up!

But then again we have been true a lot already...
Never giving up has made us stronger every single time.
Simply giving in seems weak and so defensive.
Besides if I would loose you, my life wouldn’t really be worth anything!

I have decided to go on!
No matter how cruel and uncertain our life may seem,
It’s still better then giving up!

Because you are the one that I love!!

And I know together we can never fail!!!

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Well I haven't used this thread in ages, but I also haven't written anything in ages either, so yeah...
Anyway a lot has happened and writing has always been a good way of working through stuff so I thought I'd give it another go. So yeah I have a part of a poem and I thought I´d share it.
Like I said it´s not finished yet and I don´t really know if it ever will be. We´ll have to wait and see I guess. :P
Anyway any comment is always welcome. :)

Sitting in my ivory tower,
As a ruler on my throne.
But despite all that power,
I can't help but feel alone.

Keeping all intruders out,
No one is aloud inside my wall.
I don't trust myself, I am filled with doubt,
I need someone to help me live, alone I'm sure to fall.


Reading it back I'm still not convinced. :think: It's not great... But atleast it's a start seeing I haven't been able to get anything written for quite some time. :)

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