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 Post Posted: Sun May 18, 2008 12:27 am 
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Lacunaz
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Location: nowhere special, somewhere you wont find me,
fifteen years ago,
last time i saw your face,
now the image of you
is all i see in the mirror,
I.CANT.BE.LIKE.YOU

Chorus:
i wont end up like you,
not another user, abuser, accuser,
believing your empty lies,
your face blurring my vision red,
your names my trigger to kill

hearing what you are,
from the one who loved you the most,
why did no one see it sooner?
see what you are,
what i dont want to become

Chorus

this is what you always are,
someone who cant see
that they're breaking their
three year old sons vision of what
a father should really be

Chorus

now your sons grown up,
now angry and hatefilled,
dont want to see your face again,
lest i be driving my fist into it,
fuck you and all that you are,
i hate you for all that you were,
now i despise you for what i shall become!

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a child i never was, memories i never had, a father who was never there


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 Post Posted: Tue May 20, 2008 6:12 pm 
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Holy crap. That is scarily good. I like the progressive imagery that is within it. It is good. Hopefully this isn't a reflection of what's inside you. But if it is, hold on. It gets better.

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If it has made you colder
Turning your life for justice
They have learned to obey
Broken the rules i followed
Burning for name so hollow
I will learn to obey....(Charon)


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 Post Posted: Wed May 21, 2008 12:27 am 
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FallenSun wrote:
Holy crap. That is scarily good. I like the progressive imagery that is within it. It is good. Hopefully this isn't a reflection of what's inside you. But if it is, hold on. It gets better.


i have more lyrics to come :twisted: been away from writing for a while, but now im back with ALOT more writings, been off growing up, looking back on things, etc. and got ALOT more to write about now so :twisted: i'm gonna be back for business

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 Post Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 3:13 pm 
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That's awesome. It flows really well. I'm sorry if it's personally about you. I hope you feel better soon.


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