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 Post Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 4:34 pm 
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Ignoring your mind, ignoring yourself
Slipping deeper in an unawake able sleep
Showing signs of self decay… or rust
Only visible of your logical dreams

Asleep, awake, no choice to make
Your time is come and slowly fading
You see, it’s me you’ve come to see
To know your time is surely come

Inside your darkness, awakens a light
Of truth, of freedom, in God is
An echo of a friendly sky,
Awakenings of Truth tonight,
Your life is surely fading

Acknowledgments are bittersweet
Choices are all of self defeat
Your truth it lies within your lies
You reek of depth within your soul
You know you know, but you don’t know
Your soul is surely fading

Slipping away to the outer realm
Of a darkness, surely out of date
Your fate, your chance to make this pass
Will life be granted to you?

You’ve taken, you’ve given
You’re hopelessly mistaken
Forgiven, forever stirred, not shaken
Out of time, out of doubt
You look but see there’s no way out
You see your time is faded.

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i like the last line of each stanza alot, its very good

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